Thursday, 21 October 2010

individual review. Tonatiuh

IMDB Review
Review by: Keith Simanton
Starring: Scarlett Johansson, Ewan McGregor, Djimon Hounsou, Steve Buscemi
8 out of 10: Director Michael Bay's new action film, The Island, is a crackling good action movie but it can't keep its own momentum up, stumbling in the end, and reaching its dirt-caked-arms out in anguish at its goal, just a few feet away from being a great sci-fi action movie, nearing a Total Recall-comparison. You almost want to run out on the field, help it to its feet and say, "Good try."
Still, for the breadth of its running time The Island combines a gritty style with a Darwinian plot to create some thrilling sequences. It's all capped by a highway chase set piece (the "giant metal spool" scene shown in ads) that is really rather astounding and truly memorable.
Bay (Armageddon, Pearl Harbor) seems so inspired because he's got his teeth into the kind of screenplay (written by Alex Kurtzman, Roberto Orci and Caspian Tredwell-Owen, based on his story) that suits him best, a "kill or be killed" scenario that keeps the talk to a minimum and the frantic movement to a maximum.
Lincoln Six Echo (Ewan McGregor) has nightmares about going to the Island. It's odd because they start out on a nice boat, with a pretty girl, and suddenly he's drowning, surrounded by half-formed, hairless men who pull him down. When he wakes up his bad dreams have been noticed by the monitor in his room, and some unseen overseer puts him on food rations to cure any biological imbalance as evidenced by the bad REM time. Lincoln is one of a colony of people who live in a penned-up facility, hermetically sealed off from the outside. They've been rescued from the external world, a contaminated place that is so noxious not even insects have survived, and they have a simple, uncomplicated life. Their one shared dream is to go to "the Island" the last known un-contaminated place on the planet and they're chosen by lottery to go there.
Lincoln is attracted to his friend Jordan Two Delta (Scarlett Johansson), who has recently been selected to go to the Island, but the handlers of the facility don't let them get very close; they have to watch their proximity to one another. Lincoln's nightmares get him called up by Merrick (Sean Bean), the operator of the facility. Merrick is right to suspect something is up for Lincoln has become insatiably curious. Lincoln is trusted though and allowed to step into the outer corridor of the clean environment where he has befriended McCord (Steve Buscemi, essentially reprising his role from Armageddon), a kind-hearted maintenance guy.
Of course, the facility is not what it seems and Lincoln discovers that Merrick and his cohorts have sinister designs on him and his fellow inhabitants. They are all clones, grown as "insurance policies" to ensure that their "sponsors" on the outside have harvestable body parts. Lincoln and Jordan escape and discover that they're in the middle of Arizona in 2019 and the world isn't contaminated at all. With mercenaries from Merrick on their tail (led by Djimon Hounsou) they attempt to get to Los Angeles to tell the world about themselves and the hideous corporation that created them.
This scenario provides for a lot of action that could be called mindless but is exquisitely complicated and beautiful in its execution. I have a habit of jumping and flinching when a stunt looks particularly realistic and I jumped and flinched a lot in The Island. Several of the bad guys are hit with pipes, wrenches, etc. and the sound effects and editing give some fine wincing moments.
Much of the film harkens back to other films such as Capricorn One, Logan's Run but doesn't copy from them directly. The clones are fully matured but they're only a few years old; they're naïve innocents. This interesting take makes what could have been a hard-to-swallow first act more easily digestible. The clones don't quite get that there's something wrong with their situation (Hey, why are there people in black suits who supervise us?) but we do and quickly. Bay, for once, lets the audience make leaps before his characters and then anticipates what the audience is thinking and doesn't help the stragglers who haven't figured it out yet. It's a monumental step in his career.
But people don't go to Michael Bay films to circumvent the tropes the cinema. They're there for the big booms and Bay pays off and more, and then provides annuities. The signature chase sequence, wherein Jordan and Lincoln hide out on a tanker hauling metal spools and release the straps that hold them, provides about a gasp every other second. Bay and his filmmakers make an action sequence for the record books.
The Island also provides-gasp-some moral complications as well. A clone mother has a baby, then is euthenized in the birthing room. The baby is then handed over to an expectant (and from all appearances loving) couple in another room. The sponsors are the clones only hope because they're the only ones who can prove what has happened at Merrick, but these are people who are doing exactly what the clones are doing, trying to survive. When Jordan attempts to contact her sponsor she discovers she's a model in a coma from an accident and accidentally gets the model's child on a two-way visual tele-phone. "Mommy?" the kid queries, when he sees her face, leaving Jordan to realize that she's consigning her sponsor to death. It's good stuff.
But the finale of the film feels as restructured as Cher's face. The biggest service the two escaped clones could provide, to alert the world of the acts behind the Merrick corporation (Merrick has always said that it harvests organs from stand-alone chrysalis that have no sentience, no feelings), gets shuffled off for the bigger, and riskier feat of returning to free their fellow clones.
McGregor is fine as Lincoln but he's actually much looser, and more interesting, as his sponsor, Tom, a renegade designer and engineer whose life of unprotected sex has left him with a kidney doomed to failure from hepatitis. Johansson is Kewpie-doll cute and Jordan is correspondingly blithely unaware of what's going on (her version of street smarts is buffaloing the cafeteria lady). One wants more backbone, more instinct coming from such a hunted creature but she reacts as if they're playing a very mean version of a video game.
As far as satisfying action flicks go, The Island keeps up with some of the best of them but, as if looking to the sidelines to hear the advice of its coach, trips over its own feet, missing out on the chance to be a great action flick as well.
IMDB Review
This review was written by Keith Simanton. He starts talking about the film straight away and giving his opinion. ‘a crackling good action movie but it can't keep its own momentum up’, shows that he uses a light tone throughout the review. The review is written in a manner to entertain the audience and inform them about the movie. Words like "Good try" and "kill or be killed" are words that will entertain the readers. The reviewer concentrates on the director of the film telling us about his intentions and his skills. “Bay (Armageddon, Pearl Harbor) seems so inspired”. He also links the director with other of his films to make the audience aware of the director’s line of films. The review doesn’t give a chronological order of the film. It starts of telling the audience about the most exciting thrilling sequences in the film. Then after he starts giving a more detailed summary of the film, telling us about the events in chronological order. The use of language shows us that he is addressing a younger mature audience. “It's good stuff”. The reviewer keeps the audience interested with humor mixed with his own opinions, “But the finale of the film feels as restructured as Cher's face”. We also hear about the main actors in the film and about their roles.

individual review. Tonatiuh

The Island

By JUSTIN CHANG




Ewan McGregor and Scarlett Johansson are clones on the run in Michael Bay's futuristic actioner 'The Island.'


A DreamWorks release of a DreamWorks and Warner Bros. presentation of a Parkes/MacDonald production. Produced by Walter F. Parkes, Michael Bay and Ian Bryce. Executive producer, Laurie MacDonald.
Director, Michael Bay. Screenplay, Caspian Tredwell-Owen, Alex Kurtzman and Roberto Orci, based on a story by Tredwell-Owen.

Lincoln Six Echo/Tom Lincoln - Ewan McGregor
Jordan Two Delta/Sarah Jordan - Scarlett Johansson
Albert Laurent - Djimon Hounsou
Merrick - Sean Bean
Starkweather - Michael Clarke Duncan
Jones Three Echo - Ethan Phillip
Carnes - Max Baker
McCord - Steve Buscemi
 
"The Island" is no paradise. In his latest exercise in sensory overkill, producer-helmer Michael Bay takes on the weighty moral conundrums of human cloning, resolving them in a storm of bullets, car chases and more explosions than you can shake a syringe at. Frenetic actioner about refugees from a genetic cloning plant starts off intriguingly, burns up its ideas in the first hour and pads out the rest with joltingly repetitive action sequences. Given Bay's built-in, mostly male audience, DreamWorks and Warner Bros. look to harvest decent if not spectacular opening returns, though specimen's long-term viability is far less assured.
It's the year 2019, and Lincoln Six Echo (Ewan McGregor) is one of several hundred survivors of a cataclysm that left the whole world contaminated, save one place -- the eponymous Island. This lush retreat, Lincoln and the other refugees are promised, will one day be their home. For now, they're kept in a lavish but sterile research facility, where authorities force them to wear identifying wrist bracelets; their moods, diet and metabolism are carefully monitored; and male-female "proximity" is strictly forbidden.
Suspicious by nature and prone to prophetic nightmares, Lincoln finds his worst fears confirmed after Starkweather (Michael Clarke Duncan), selected by random lottery to go to the Island, instead winds up on a slab. When his friend and burgeoning love interest, Jordan Two Delta (Scarlett Johansson), is the next one to win the lottery, Lincoln grabs her and together they stage a jailbreak. Alarmed by the breach, sinister mastermind Dr. Merrick (Sean Bean, adding another to his gallery of villains) hires a mercenary (Djimon Hounsou) to hunt them down.
One of the small charms of "The Island" is that its test-tube protags, far from being hardened heroes, are a pair of brainwashed innocents, sealed off from the outside world and generally lacking in social smarts. McGregor exploits this most winningly, affecting an earnest gee-whiz streak and speaking his lines in a boyish, slightly higher register.
Faring not so well is Johansson, usually the subtlest of actresses, who in her first major action role has been encouraged to make a shrill, bombastic spectacle of her character's cluelessness.
Another downside of Lincoln and Jordan's ignorance is that by the time they realize what's up -- that they're walking "insurance policies," raised only to supply organs for their genetically identical owners -- auds will have long since figured everything out.
While the essentially surprise-free narrative plays catch-up, there's little to do but sit back and admire Nigel Phelps' gleaming production design; the biotech facility, in particular, suggests a cross between a day spa, a spaceship and a maximum-security prison. Yet even here, Bay's direction zips along at such an unmodulated rush, so eager to get on with the next set-piece or expository line of dialogue, that auds will have precious little time to soak up the images, much less allow their potentially troubling implications to deepen and resonate.
Setting and premise conjure countless visual and thematic echoes from other films, including "The Matrix," with its paranoid dystopian vision and roomful of sticky birth-pods, and even "The Truman Show," with its 24-hour surveillance cameras and megalomaniacal controller. One scene, featuring an army of mechanized, eye-scanning spiders, is lifted straight out of the more convincingly futuristic "Minority Report."
The references feel thoroughly secondhand; Bay ultimately is interested in the science and ethics of cloning only insofar as they provide a backdrop for all the vehicular chaos he's set to unleash. (Ancillary moral: Clones are human, too.)
In terms of spectacle, pic is a pileup of kinetic mayhem, as Lincoln and Jordan's first actions in the real world include dodging bullets, destroying several police cars and crashing a hovercraft into a skyscraper.
Yet for all the vertiginous camera movements and ace visual effects, the action remains tension-free and largely incoherent, thanks to attention-deficit editing by Paul Rubell and Christian Wagner.
Scribes Caspian Tredwell-Owen, Alex Kurtzman and Roberto Orci save their best lines for the superbly snarky Steve Buscemi, as a facility staffer who comes to the clones' aid (and has a priceless exchange with "Ghost World" co-star Johansson in the process). And pic has sly fun with Lincoln's and Jordan's "owners"; former is played by McGregor in an effective second role, while latter is glimpsed in Johansson's real-life Calvin Klein ad. Other product placements, particularly by Aquafina, are too numerous to mention.
Camera (Technicolor prints, Panavision widescreen), Mauro Fiore; editors, Paul Rubell, Christian Wagner; music, Steve Jablonsky; production designer, Nigel Phelps; supervising art director, David Sandefur; art directors, Jon Billington, Sean Haworth, Martin Whist; set decorator, Rosemary Brandenburg; costume designer, Deborah L. Scott; sound (Dolby Digital/DTS/SDDS), Peter J. Devlin; supervising sound editors, Per Hallberg, Karen Baker Landers; visual effects supervisor, Eric Brevig; special visual effects and animation, Industrial Light & Magic; assistant director, Josh McLaglen; stunt coordinator, Kenny Bates; associate producers, Steven P. Saeta, McLaglen, Bates, Heidi Fugeman Lindelof, Matthew Cohan; casting, Denise Chamian. Reviewed at AMC Century City 14, Los Angeles, July 9, 2005. MPAA Rating: PG-13. Running time: 136 MIN.

WWW.VARIETY.COM  BY Justin Chang
The review was written by Justin Chang, for www.variety.com, on the 10th of July 2005. The review includes an overview of the film, giving us information about the characters and the storyline. The review is written in an informal tone with words like ‘auds’, as a short way of saying audience, and ‘realize what's up’. Using informal words will create a relationship with the target audience, as the target audience will feel comfortable in the writing style in which the review is written. The review talks about the film and also uses words from the film to familiarize the audience with the movie. For example the quote, ‘male-female "proximity" is strictly forbidden.’ shows the audience about the movie and what is involved. The reviewer explains to the audience how the main actors fit their role in the film and how well they act. ‘McGregor exploits this most winningly’.

Tuesday, 12 October 2010

REECE REPORT - Joannie & Tonatiuh



Location - Park
The action in which takes part in this location is:
When Alfred drops the bag at the park and has to go back to retrieve it.
This location is suitable for an action genre because chase scenes take place in outside areas as there is more space.
The only problem experience we are likely to get from filming in this location is the pedestrians that are likely to be at the park at the same time and also we have to be cautious of the weather as it very unpredictable it might not work out when we are filming; as its autumn the weather is most likely to be rainy.
We intend to get around the problem by filming in the places that pedestrians are less likely to arrive and if not then we will ask them nicely to move away from the little bit that’s going to be recorded.
The only
Location – Isle of Dogs
The action in which takes part in this location is:
When we first meet Tona and the chase between him and Alfred occurs.
The location is suitable for an action genre because it is an outside location.
The only problem we are likely to get from filming in this location is that isle of dogs is a busy location filled with many pedestrians.
We intend to get around this problem by either filming in the morning before it gets busy or when the people are there ask them to move nicely. 












Location – Isle of Dogs Alleyway
This action which takes place in this location is when Alfred gets cornered for the bag by Tona .
The location is suitable for an action/thriller genre as in most actions or thriller there should be mystery and as the chase goes towards an alley it shows something is about to happen.
The problem we are likely to get from filming in this location is that the camera lighting may be dark.
We intend to get around this problem as the alley is ment to be dark so there shouldn’t be a problem.

Review layout analysis





Friday, 8 October 2010

The Shotlist!! tonatiuh,

SHOT LIST


Shot (description of sound & action)
Shot size
Angle
Movement
1.      Alfred kicking gate (montage) sound-heartbeat

CU
straight

2.      Alfred getting chased, running towards camera. (montage)
LS
Low angle

3. Alfred’s foot stepping on a puddle.
(montage)

BCU
Low angle

4.Alfred gets caught
punch1
(montage)

LS
Straight

5. Alfred punches other guy
    Punch 2
(Montage)

MCU
Straight

6.Alfred jumping over fence
(montage)

MCU
Low angle

7.Alfred running to hide the bag
( end of montage)

LS
Low angle

8. Alfred hiding bag


MS
High Angle

9. Alfred Walking away


LS
Straight

10. Alfred stops walking as he gets called
(mobile phone ringing)

MS
Low angle

11. Alfred takes out his mobile phone angrily.


MS
Low angle

12. Alfred speaks to the mysterious person about the bag


MCU
Straight

13. Alfred realizes that his life depends on it. He walks back to collect the bag

LS
straight

14.  Tona is walking on the street with a birthday card in hand

LS
Straight

15. Tona walking on the street writing in the card. CCTV camera shot following Tona

LS & MS
High Angle
Panning along then zoom into the character
16. Tona writing a birthday message to his daughter.


CU
High Angle

17. Tona gets a message on the phone.


CU
Low Angle

18. Tona stops writing and reaches for his phone.


CU
Low angle

19. Tona receives the text and is surprised what he sees


CU
Low angle

20. we see the message


BCU
High angle

21. Tona is confused and scared, he starts looking around


MS
Straight

22. Tona searches for his daughters number and calls her


BCU
High angle

23. It cuts to Alfred walking to get the bag


LS
Straight angle

24. Alfred walking to get the bag, going through the gate.


MS
 Straight angle
Panning
25. Alfred  then goes to the exact place and picks up the bag


LS
Straight angle
panning
26. He grabs the bag


CU
High angle

27. Cuts back to Tona with a worried face expression waiting for his daughter to pick up the phone.


MS
Straight angle

28. she answers and he asks if she is ok, where she is…


CU
Straight angle

29. it cuts to the daughter on her bed on her laptop, answering in a happy mood.


LS
High angle

30.it cuts back to Tona asking her ‘so u are alright?’


MCU
Straight angle

28. Cuts back to the daughter telling her dad everythings is ok. He asks her ‘if she has decided what to do for her Birthday’,  and she tells him what she wants


MCU
Straight angle

29. It cuts back to Tona on the phone telling her he is coming soon, but suddenly he hears a loud bang on the otherside of the phone. Few moments later he hears his daughter start screaming.


MS
Straight angle

30. Tona is shouting asking what is happening. She doesn’t reply and the phone hangs up.


CU
Straight angle
shake
31. he gets a message exactly after the phone hangs up. The shot is blurry as he is so scared he feels sick.


CU
Low angle
Slight tilting
32. He reads it. It says ‘we have your daughter now, if u want her alive bring to us what we need’. His facial expression is shocked then turns angry, as soon as he reads the message there is a sound effect as he realizes what happens. He slowly moves his head up and stops.


CU
Low angle/straight angle
Pan up then 360 arc around his face
33. He then gets another message on his phone.


MLS
Straight angle

34. He reads what it says. ‘Go down the road. You are going to deliver a bag to us’
(phone screen)

CU
High angle.

35. His face looking around then confused, going down the road.


MS
Low angle/straight angle
Pan up
36. it cuts to Alfred walking on the road with the bag


LS
Straight
Pan to the side
37. CCTV camera following Alfred coming out of a corner.


LS
High angle

38. CCTV camera watching alfred


LS
High angle

39. cuts back to Tona,. CCTV camera watching Tona walking confused


LS
High angle

40. cuts back to Alfred walking, fast paced. Slowly Walks over the camera


LS
Low angle

41. cuts to Tona walking down the street


MLS
Straight

42. CCTV camera following alfred walking down the road


LS
High angle
panning
43. Cuts back to Tona slowing down looking at his phone.



LS
Straight angle

44. CCTV camera watching Tona walking down the road


LS
High angle.
panning
45. Cuts back to Alfred walking fast paced, with a fed up facial expression.


LS/MS
Low angle/straight angle

46. CCTV watching Alfred walk and someone walk towards him.


LS
High angle

panning
47.Alfred is walking then gets barged by Tona who turns around to say’Excuse me’. Alfred gives him a dirty look then walks off.


MLS
Straight angle

48. close up of Tona’s face saying excuse me. And giving a quick glimpse off Alfreds apparel, lookin at his bag


CU
straight

49. Alfred begins walking off


MS
straight

50. Tona is about to turn around and continue his way, wen he gets a message on the phone to take the bag.


MCU
straight

51. phone screen showing the text


BCU
High angle

52. tona’s face is surprised he turns around and looks at the bag.


CU/LS
straight

53. Alfred looks back and noticeds Tona staring at him and the bag, he starts to walk faster


LS
straight

54. Tona begins to follow him


MS
straight

55.  Alfred is being followed. You can see tona in the background


LS
Low angle

56. alfreds looks back and sees tona following him so he begins to run.


MLS
straight

57. cuts back to tona starting to run.


LS
straight

58. Alfred is running away, and tona is running after him


MLS
straight

59. CCTV camera watches Alfred turn into an alleyway/street and Tona going after him.


LS
High angle

60. Alfred is running down the alleyway, only to realize it’s a dead end.


MLS/LS
straight

61. cuts to Tona slowing down, preparing to get physical


LS
straight

62. Afred takes deep breathes staring at Tona


MS
Straight

63. Tona starts explaining to Alfred, why he is doing this.


MS
straight

64. Alfred replies to him


CU
Low angle

65. cuts to the road they were on before, and we only see the entrance of the alleyway (CCTV camera)
Then we hear a gunshot

BLS
High angle

66. someone walks out of the alleyway
We just see the leg and foot of the person


CU
straight

67.  Alfred continues walking fast. He is crossing the road.


LS
Straight

68. Alfred walks down the road, as he is going to deliver the bag.


LS
straight

69. Alfred sees a man in the distance. This is where he has to deliver the bag. Alfred walks towards him.


MLS
straight

70.  Alfred looking at the man


CU
straight

71. Alfred reaches the unknown character. The strange character speaks to Alfred.


MLS
Straight

72. Alfred drops the bag on the floor next to him.


LS
straight

73.  Alfred gives the man an aggressive look.


CU
straight

74. The man moves to pick up the bag.


MLS
straight
Pan
75. As the man is about to walk away Tona appears behind the man. The man looks surprised and looks back at Alfred and speaks to him. Then looks back at Tona briefly.


MS
straight

76.  Alfred explains what happened.


MCU
straight
Starts to get blurry
77. A flashback to the scene where Tona Cornered Alfred.


LS
straight

78. Afred takes deep breathes staring at Tona


MS
Straight

79. Tona starts explaining to Alfred, why he is doing this.


MS
straight

80. Alfred replies to him


CU
Low angle

81. Tona is about to grab Alfred. Then Alfred gets Tona on the floor.


MS/LS
Low angle
Camera shake
82.  Cuts to Alfreds face grabbing Tona arm in a submission move. Tona tells Alfred he just wants his daughter.


MS
High angle

83. Alfreds looks at him then lets his arm go.


MS
Low angle

84. Alfred takes out a gun points it at Tona.


MS
Low angle

85.  Tona is scared and shouting


CU
High angle

86. Alfred is just looking at him.


CU
Low angle

87. Alfred starts to move the gun closer to Tona’s face.


MS
straight

88.  Alfred moves the gun away and shoots it, at the ground.


MS
High angle
Getting blurry
89. Flashback finishes, Alfred explains to the man why he didn’t kill him.


MCU
straight

90. The mysterious man is just confused and surprised. He starts to back away.


MS
straight

91. Tona shouts to the man, where his daughter is. He is angry and fed up.


MS
Low angle

92. Alfred asks the man where his money is.


CU
straight

93. The mysterious man is blabbering and stumbles on the floor.


MCU
High angle

94. Tona and Alfred crowd the man on the floor.


MLS
High angle

95. black screen end